Wednesday, November 11, 2015

Help with Poems

Help with both Eros Poems:

https://joelsal.wordpress.com/2008/11/06/eros/

https://moodle.cpsd.us/moodle/mod/forum/discuss.php?d=6969

https://joelsal.wordpress.com/2008/11/06/eros/


Help with "We Grow Accustomed..."

http://www.shmoop.com/we-grow-accustomed-to-the-dark/stanza-1-summary.html

http://www.shmoop.com/we-grow-accustomed-to-the-dark/analysis.html

http://kp2-oedipus.wikispaces.com/Poem+Analysis

Help with "Acquainted with the Night..."

http://www.shmoop.com/acquainted-with-night/summary.html

http://www.shmoop.com/acquainted-with-night/analysis.html






Monday, November 9, 2015

EXAMPLE OF A PARAPHRASED SONNET

SONNET 1

From fairest creatures we desire increase,
That thereby beauty's rose might never die,
But as the riper should by time decease,
His tender heir might bear his memory:
But thou, contracted to thine own bright eyes,
Feed'st thy light's flame with self-substantial fuel,
Making a famine where abundance lies,
Thyself thy foe, to thy sweet self too cruel.
Thou that art now the world's fresh ornament
And only herald to the gaudy spring,
Within thine own bud buriest thy content
And, tender churl, makest waste in niggarding.
    Pity the world, or else this glutton be,
    To eat the world's due, by the grave and thee.

 PARAPHRASE

We desire that all created things may grow more plentiful,
So that nature's beauty may not die out,
But as an old man dies at the hand of time,
He leaves an heir to carry on his memory:
But you, interested only in your own beauty,
Feed the radiant light of life with self-regarding fuel,
Making a void of beauty by so obsessing over your own looks,
With this behavior you are being cruel to yourself.
You are now the newest ornament in the world, young and beautiful
And the chief messenger of spring,
But you are burying the gifts you have been given within yourself
And, dear one, because you deny others your beauty, you are actually wasting it.
   Take pity on the world, or else be regarded as a selfish glutton,
   By the laws of God and nature you must
create a child, so that the grave does not

devour the memory of your loveliness.

Help with Poems

Point of view is a reflection of the opinion an individual from real life or fiction can have. Examples of point of view belong to one of these three major kinds:
1. First person point of view involves the use of either of the two pronouns “I” and “we”.
  • Example:
  • I felt like I was getting drowned with shame and disgrace.”
2. Second person point of view employs the pronoun “you”.
  • “Sometimes you cannot clearly discern between anger and frustration.”
3. Third person point of view uses pronouns like “he”, “she”, “it”, “they” or a name.
  • Mr. Stewart is a principled man. He acts by the book and never lets you deceive him easily.”

IMAGERY

As a literary device, imagery consists of descriptive language that can function as a way for the reader to better imagine the world of the piece of literature and also add symbolism to the work. Imagery draws on the five senses, namely the details of tastetouchsightsmell, and sound. Imagery can also pertain to details about movement or a sense of a body in motion (kinesthetic imagery) or the emotions or sensations of a person, such as fear or hunger (organic imagery or subjective imagery). Using imagery helps the reader develop a more fully realized understanding of the imaginary world that the author has created.


Comparison and Contrast Info Packet

http://scsworkshops.info/wp-content/uploads/2012/01/The-Literary-Comparison-Contrast-Essay.pdf

Comparison and Contrast Essay Information and video links

Comparison and Contrast Essay Information and video links
Comparison and Contrast Essay Lesson Plan:
Step 1: Choose Your Poems


Emily Dickinson's Poem "We grow accustomed..." HERE
http://poetry-fromthehart.blogspot.com/2014/04/we-grow-accustomed-to-dark-emily.html

A.      Read the TWO poems

B.      Paraphrase BOTH POEMS
 http://www.slideshare.net/Bulldog4/14-2-paraphrasing-power-point

C.      Annotate your copy. Look for literary techniques that each poet uses and determine how they each go about elaborating on the topic.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6cVU-0Zqnq4&spfreload=10
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9RFqnrBfgCA

D.     Come up with a theme and find two pieces of textual evidence to support your theme.
Theme: A lesson about life. Not a one word topic. It relates to all people, not just the characters.

Example: In life everyone must face their own mortality at some point.



Packet and Model:



Step 2: (ELEMENTS OF A COMPARISON AND CONTRAST ESSAY):
·         View and answer the following questions
o   What should be in your introduction?
o   What is a topic sentence and where should it be within your paper?
o   What are examples of concrete details?
o   What should the commentary explain?
o   What is the concluding sentence and what is its purpose?
o   What elements are required to be in my concluding paragraph?

·         Notes of Point-by-Point Method
o   How many paragraphs are used in this method?
o   How many concrete details and commentary are needed in each paragraph?
o   How many sentences should be in each body paragraph?
o   List all of the sentences needed in each paragraph and in the order they appear.
o   Using the example, explain the purposes of the concrete detail and commentary sentences.

·         Notes on the Block Method
o   How many body paragraphs are in this method?
o   How many concrete details per paragraph do you have using this method?
o   How many sentences are needed in each body paragraph?
o   What will you be eliminating using this methods?



Step 3: (GRAPHIC ORGANIZERS):
·         Poster Board Sheets
Use the graphic organizer to begin comparing and contrasting the two poems. Find textual support for each aspect of the organizer.


Step 4: (THESIS):
  • View the video clip and compose your thesis statement.
  • When you are finished everyone in your group should have a solid thesis statement for their essay.
  • Now add your own standpoint or argument to the thesis.

Step 5: (OUTLINE):
·         Copies of worksheets
Use of the graphic organizers and organize your essay.

Step 6: (EMBEDDING QUOTES):
You will use the quotes from your organizer to embed in your essay.

Step 7: (FINAL ESSAY)
Below are the requirements for each paragraph of your essay:
View this video and answer the following questions:
1.      What should be in the introduction?
2.      What is a good hook? (WE ARE DOING THE UNIVERSAL HOOK)
3.      What is the purpose of the topic sentence?
4.      What is the commentary?
5.      What are transitions? Provide examples.

Introduction:
1.      Hook    2. Introduction of the author and title of both works       3. Overall Meaning of both works in 1-2 Sentences        4. Plot Summary of each in 1-2 sentences     5. Emotions of the speakers in each   6. Thesis explaining how you think they compare or contrast overall

Body 1:
1.      Topic Sentence on similarities    2. Similarity evidence (1-2 sentences)       3. Similarity analysis (3 sentences)      
Body 2:
1.      Topic Sentence on differences   2. Differences evidence (1-2 Sentences)   3. Differences analysis (3 sentences)

Body/Conclusion:
1.      Restate your thesis (use totally different wording)
2.      Restate your topic sentences using totally different wording
3.      Write your “So What” sentence.
A.      What new revelation can be acquired about the themes by understanding the way these words are similar and different?
B.      How does the message from the two connect to the human experience, although they are told differently and similarly?